Wonder Woman beat sheet!

I loved the movie Wonder Woman. I’ve been waiting for it my entire life. See.

(Mash up of Wonder Woman and Spider Girl, with facial hair of course. 🙂 )

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With all of this hype about the release of the DVD, I’m reminded of when I dissected the storyline. The very first time I saw the movie on opening day, I noticed how it followed the Save the Cat story structure by Blake Snyder. It really clicked at the “High Tower Surprise” moment and then all of the other beats fell into place.

My family knows I’m a pretty tough movie critic and so they always ask me what I think afterwards. Wiping the remaining tears, I whispered, “it was perfect.” Then I proceeded with an avalanche of words at why the story, to me, was so perfectly told. The fourth time I saw Wonder Woman in the theaters, it was so apparent that it followed Save the Cat, I brought a timer and timed when all of the beats hit.

I’ve been using the Save the Cat method for several years now. Here is a detailed Blog Post I wrote about marrying Save the Cat and the Scrivener writing program. It’s the same structure that my critique group uses when we discuss our manuscripts. Pinpointing the obvious beats in Wonder Woman has helped me define more clearly my own stories.

Here are the beats along with the times that they hit. (Obviously there are massive spoilers below because I’m outlining the whole movie.) People who use Save the Cat, what do you think?

Opening Image: first 9 minutes. Shows her as a child and shows her determination.

Theme Stated: 9 minute mark of the movie. I think the goal is “You are stronger than you believe.” They say it right when when she is looking at the sword. But I think the theme of the movie is, “Love will save the world.” She says it several times toward the end.

Set – up: everything before 14 minutes. Time at Themyscira, training, her growing up. Also, the bad guys are introduced. Show how and why Diana needs to change to win. Show what she’s lacking. The calm before the storm.

Catalyst: This hits right at the 14 minute mark. The catalyst is the first moment when something BIG happens. And that moment is when Diana witnesses the plane crash into the ocean. Then the fight on the beach follows. Life changing events.

Debate: 30-36 minute marks. Should Diana go to the world of men? There is an actual debate in front of her mother. The Debate moment is the last chance for the hero to say “this is crazy.” Should I go? Do I dare? Moment of truth. Make a firm decision and off she goes.

Act 2 (break into two): 38 minute mark. Moment when she leaves the old world. Diana goes to London. There is a definite change of scenery and tone. She is now on her journey. She states how hideous London is. Yes, a definite change of scenery.

B Story: 40 minute mark. The love story portion. The story that carries the theme (Love will save the world) of the book. Diana holds hands with Steve Trevor, she sees a baby, walks through London taking it all in. B-story is a breather. Can introduce a brand new bunch of characters.

Fun & Games: 45 minute mark. This is such an obvious beat change. We take a break from the stakes and see what the idea is all about. The music even changes, the lighting is brighter, the tone is lighter. This is when she eats ice cream, tries on the different clothing, fight in the ally. Gathering the team in the bar. Asks about plan.

*We see the bad guys again. Also, the tone starts to change again after the fun and games leading up to the mid point. This changes because we see the affects of the war. And the bad guys kill the generals with poison.

Midpoint: This hits exactly at 1:08 (one hour eight minutes mark) It is almost exactly the time of the movie cut in half, which is 2 hours 21 minutes long. Stakes are raised at midpoint. This midpoint moment is when she is climbing up the stairs, in her armor, up into the war and no man’s land. Epic music blares. She pauses–just so we see how awesome she is! And she is. I swear, this is about when the tears started flowing for me. It was a rally cry. This is when I knew, just knew, that women in movies would never be the same. I would’ve followed her into the war, that’s how powerful this scene was to me!

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*Then coming off of the midpoint we see a false defeat. A & B story start to come together as they dance and kiss.

Bad guys close in: 1:22 (one hour twenty-two minute mark) This is the Gala. The Dance. Then the bad guys and bombs and gas hit at 1:25. Wonder Woman follows Ares.

All is lost: 1:33 She kills Ares, but why are people still fighting? Diana is distraught. All is lost moment is a false defeat. All aspects of the hero’s life are in shambles.

Dark night of the soul: 1:35 Men are weak, men aren’t to be trusted. People aren’t always good. She wants to give up. Dark night of the soul moment is when we admit our humility and humanity.

Break into Three: 1:41 – A and B story intertwine. An idea to solve the problem has emerged. This is when Diana is bound and watches as Steve stops the bomb with his plane.

Act Three, finale begins – 1:48 (gathering team, execute plan, high tower surprise, dig down deep, execute new plan) High tower surprise. The setting is set on a high tower–perfect! The surprise is that she killed the fake Ares. The true one rises up. Here is the “men are evil” debate. Flashback to the Gods. God killer. You are broken. Wonder Woman has to dig down deep. Then her full powers come. Theme is stated, again. “Love will save the world.” And ta-daa, it did! I also loved her badassery when she was fighting Ares! So so good.

Final Image: 1:58 -(one hour fifty-eight minutes) The final image is opposite of the opening image. It is your proof that change has occurred and that it’s real. So instead of her being surrounded by her family in Themiscyra, she is surrounded by humans in a crowd after the war. She smiles at people kissing on the streets and then she sees a photo of Steve–both images are another nod to the theme. Then there is a bonus final image of Wonder Woman looking at the black and white photo of her friends. She says the theme, “Only love can truly save the world. So I stay and I fight and I give.”

The End: 2:21

Well, what do you think? Do you agree with the beats? I would love to hear and discuss with you. Now excuse me while I go pop some pop corn. . . I’ve got a movie to watch.

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Tara 🙂

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My tumultuous relationship with a manuscript:

My tumultuous relationship with a manuscript:

Upon first meeting, nearly seven years ago, it was love at first sight. I was overcome. Passionate words were brought to life in the quiet hours of night. I pined over my new manuscript when we were not together during the days. The characters, the setting, the story, consumed my thoughts like the raging hormones of a teenager.

Oh we had some glorious times! I felt alive, free, and blissfully happy! But love is blindness and so I didn’t see the mistakes, the enormous plot holes, or the seeds of doubt over my entire outline. I was blinded by cutest couple awards and sweet caresses at night.

Over the years those relationship problems have grown more acute. I’ve sat down with my manuscript and have given it a stern talking to about its wayward looks and wild side. I’ve tried to wrap it up into a clean outline. But we end up laughing, then crying, because both of us know that isn’t us. But the thing that really kills us is the comparison . . . the looking at the success of other relationships, then looking at each other and saying, “why can’t we be like that?”

Over the years I have shown this manuscript to my friends and put it through relationship advice. We even went through intense therapy for a year. Some friends thought it was adorable and that we were perfect for each other. My therapist? Not so much. The advice was welcome, but hurt, and I wondered if I was in an unhealthy relationship with my manuscript. I’ve revised and reworked it nearly twenty times. How could something I love hurt me so?

There have been moments, sometimes years, when we have broken up. I needed space. I dated around in the form of publishing three other books. I flirted and finished a dozen other stories. This manuscript has killed me and I have killed it and either we cannot live together anymore with all these questions and wondering, or we have to date exclusively. It’s all or nothing.

I keep going back to the bones, to the root of our love, and looking at it without the advice or the critique of others. I’ve dissected it to the point that I might have killed the passion. When you fight so much, where is there room for fun and passion?

So, I’m asking for relationship advise. What do I do with this manuscript? To completely break up with it would shatter my heart. To stay in this relationship would take a great deal of work and most likely more future cutting heartache. Maybe I try one last time to resurrect what first brought us together. Maybe the years have matured both of us. Maybe we will survive this. Maybe we won’t. Maybe, Maybe. What May Be?

Maybe I just let it go…

But maybe I don’t…

** Update on our relationship status: **

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I took these questions and concerns to the mountains and contemplated our final break up. I stared at a jagged mountain without a trail. Upon the pine-scented breeze a gentle kiss caressed my cheek, followed by a whisper in my ear.

“I love you,” my manuscript said to me.

I thought about the weight of my response. Old lessons, and encouraging keynotes, and even my own thoughts, came to mind. My eyes drifted again to where the shrouded summit met the clouds. Another attempt at an ascent, with my manuscript in tow, might kill me. I’d been circling this relationship, this mountain, worrying about breaking up, but also worrying about staying together.

I waited a long time to respond. But this manuscript is patient, even though the feeling is unreciprocated. I took a deep breath in lungs that aren’t used to high elevation changes. I placed my ailing feet in a river that had given me lazy comfort.

A peaceful feeling swept over me and a tiny smile found a tiny trail up that enormous mountain.

“I love you, too,” I whispered, as I prepared myself for the climb.

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SO:

Just like a mature relationship, there will be rules, and blisters, and cliffs and grand vistas. And I will look for joy in all of them.

Here is my plan.

HERE IS MY DAY ONE!   (head nod to Storymakers and Jennifer Nelson)

#1 – Mentally and spiritually prepare myself everyday to make this relationship work. Ask for inspiration. Pray. Meditate. Whatever it takes to calm my mind to look at this clearly so that I don’t lose my temper and storm off.

#2 – Look to the future. Reflect on the past in brief moments, but approach this as a new exciting adventure. Even though the packaging or substance is the same, it will have different wrapping. Accept that it might look different . . . again.

#3 – Follow your heart. You’ve listened to enough critique, and feedback, and praise, and especially rejection. Take everything you’ve learned from all those other relationships and put everything into this one. No matter what happens after you’ve given it your all–and you thought you already had–you will rest knowing that you did it with clarity.

#4 – Climb. Everyday climb. Some days the trail will be easy, other days you will have hardly moved. Just move or your body and mind will atrophy. It will come at you like a sudden mountain storm. Remember the elements are fighting against you and you will want to give up if you take the time to stop. It would have been easier to just start another completely different project. But there is history between the two of you and you have weathered many storms.

#5 – Don’t doubt. You were given an answer on what to do about this relationship. Don’t doubt it. Simple as that.

#6 – Surround yourself by inspiration. Make time for creative-minded friends who encourage and uplift. Go to the mountains at least once a week to write or to be surrounded by setting. Summer or winter, explore nature. This is an instant inspiration for me. Take long breaks from social media. Maybe this isn’t for everyone, but social media zaps the creative flow instantly for me. Before I check any social media sites, open up my manuscript first. Show my manuscript that it comes first. Show love and it will return the love.

#7 – Get on a schedule. Organize the household necessities first so that your mind is clear and open. It’s different for everyone, but for me it is a clean kitchen, exercise, work (whether it’s at my job, or doing housework, paying bills, etc.) Then make time for writing by turning all electronic devices and social media off.

#8 – Have fun! Writing is fun. Well, it is more torturous than fun, but if you approach writing with the above goals and don’t give up, then hopefully you will reach the summit with a gratifying smile. Learn to enjoy the journey, not the destination. And absolutely, do not compare. Comparison kills gratitude. Comparison is like a free fall off a cliff. And right now everything hinges on begin grateful for this journey.

More detailed goals just for me:

  • I know that my best writing moments are in the middle of the night. This one is hard for me to figure out. Just know that if I go to bed early I will notoriously wake up in the middle of the night to write. Or if I stay up late, learn how to deal with no sleep. It’s just a fact, no matter how hard I try to work on sleep. You’ve been nocturnal your entire life, just succumb to it. Apply more make-up to the bags under your eyes because we have committed to get off the caffeine, remember?
  • Social Media: For real, get off it. Even though you have deleted it from your phone, maybe have someone else reset a password and then tell you once a week what it is so that you can check it. It seems extreme, but it is a time suck, an energy suck, and a creativity suck. This includes Pinterest, Facebook, and Instagram. Twitter doesn’t count, I’m never on there because I hate it. My blog: update my progress weekly on the comment section of this post regarding the progress of working on my manuscript.
  • Go back to not watching TV. Whaaa, Supernatural, I love you, but I’m kind of getting frustrated with season six anyway. Okay, I can watch the new season of Fixer-Upper on Tuesday nights. I really am happier when I am not watching TV and am instead reading or living inside my own stories.
  • Read more. Actually, I get obsessed while reading and have to finish the book in one sitting. Everything else falls away, so read with caution that it will take away from writing. Read excellent words when I do so.
  • Create my create space. Finish my art and writing room. But in the meantime, don’t slack on writing as I’m “waiting” for my space to be ideal. It’s in the mindset, not the daily setting.
  • Save home renovations for Saturdays. This has been the #1 culprit of why my writing has stopped. I’ve lived in chaos and now that the home is coming together, don’t spend time nit-picking all the little projects that still need to be done. You’ve made a to-do list, so get it out of your mental list and work on checking it off on Saturdays.
  • Good music, good attitude, good vibes. Just live in a good space. I have been filled with so much criticism and negative feelings about this manuscript that I need to look for positivity. Flirt together, introduce new things, and let go of the words that aren’t working.    *Fall in love with this manuscript again!*

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My goal is to reach this summit by the end of the year. My summit is to finish revising this manuscript because I love it and I believe that together we can climb hard things.

Thanks for stopping by,

Tara

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